i like it! the melodies are characteristically cinematic, and i think that sounds pretty cool! i also enjoy the recurring theme
my only criticism is that the instrumentation is a little too "synthetic"? i.e., it's too obvious that you're using sample libraries. i'd suggest learning about dynamics and humanization
but that's all!
Thank you! I think I actually forgot to humanize the other half of the song (rip.) Also I'm working on FL Mobile so my options are very limited 😅. Thank you for the feedback!
alright, lemme try to collect my thoughts here
first of all, this seems very haphazardly put together. i can hear multiple moments where the basses and the drums don't line up rhythmically. there is also a very apparent and annoying pause between the tom fill leading into the first drop and the actual drop itself. this is structurally all over the place as well, i'd suggest learning the typical intro-buildup-drop-breakdown-buildup-drop-outro structure of edm and writing music with that
about the basses, i don't like how they really only repeat one pattern. i can also hear them detune at about 1:58. are the basses synths you made yourself, or is it one long sample?
lastly, the piano melody is rather strange. it almost sounds atonal in a way; i don't know if this is what you were going for but if not then i would want to learn some tonal harmony as well, it'll help you figure out what notes you should use
nonetheless i'll give you three and a half stars for effort, but i know you have a lot to learn
Thanks for the review dude, I'm still learning to produce dubstep, I hope to improve my production techniques soon
happy birthday!! and cool song, it's very sweet :)
Thanks much!!
you are genuinely one of the few living musicians i know who have a perfect sense of what note should come after the last
Thank you so much, it is so encouraging to be receiving such high compliments from such talented musicians :D
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do i hear microtonality in the pad at the beginning? that's fucking awesome if so
the break programming is great too, but maybe the breaks themselves could be made thicker through compression or light saturation
yeah now that you mention it I had to tune the sub bass like 40 cents up to match the pitch of the pad lol, as for the breaks, funnily enough the amen does have some distortion on it, but no compression at all since I didn't understand how that worked back when I made this track, I've only recently begun using them heh
short but sweet :) my only real criticism is maybe some of the instruments sound too synthetic and robotic (besides that lead and pad of course). also maybe it could be more energetic? great song otherwise!
maaaaan a friend told me just that about the instruments, I still struggle a bit with humanization in melodies and especially percussions since having everything on the grid is just very comfortable
cool drum patterns, and the arps and melodies are quite nice! the piano at the end is very pretty as well
i'd suggest adding some modulation to some of these sounds (especially that reese bass) to make everything more active. also, i think the drums could be more prominent in the mix, probably through lightly sidechaining everything else to them. also, maybe try adding some ear candy and quick chops in the mix to fill up the spectrum and make this more interesting
just my thoughts
Honestly not a bad idea
fantastic! great use of my "chase" drum loop :)
the melodies, the chords, the key changes, the leads, everything about this is just perfect
Thank you! Maybe I should start doing my own drums again though!
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